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Revision as of 10:21, 25 June 2007

This is a companion page to That Typos Thread in the Forum. We are collecting a chronological list of typos in the online version of the web comic, to simplify Impy's life when editing future dead tree versions. The format for entries is: date of the page, number of the panel, speech bubble. For example:

20060703, Panel 1, Meji's first bubble: "where ever town" -> "wherever this town"

The competition in the forum allows for only a single post per comic page. If you see five errors on a page, but somebody already posted a single one, do not post in the forum anymore. Just come here and enter the typos that were missing. It doesn't count for the competition, but it will help Impy.

Contents

Prologue: I Used To Believe...

20021108, Panel 1, the first bubble: "everyday" -> "every day"
20021108, Panel 2, Sarine's fourth bubble: "such weird concept" -> "such a weird concept"

Chapter 1: Psychotic Mage Chick

20021213, Panel 5, Meji's second bubble: "passes" -> "passed"
20021218, Panel 2, Rena's bubble: "arguing how" -> "arguing that"
20021225, Panel 3, the teacher's third bubble: "very dangerous world" -> "a very dangerous world"
20021225, Panel 4, the teacher's second bubble: "accomplish little" -> "accomplish your little"
20030101, Panel 2, Meji's second bubble: "happen" -> "happened"
20030108, Panel 2, Meji's second bubble: "abet" -> "albeit"
20030108, Panel 3, Meji's first bubble: "bunch elves" -> "bunch of elves"
20030108, Panel 3, Meji's third bubble: "anymore" -> "any more"
20030108, Panel 5, Meji's first bubble: "where ever" -> "wherever"
20030113, Panel 1, Ellis' second bubble: "equivalency" -> "equivalent"

Chapter 2: Dead Leaves

20030307, Panel 4, Meji's second bubble: "spiky haired" -> "spiky-haired"
20030310, Panel 2, Meji's first bubble: "or at pretend" -> "or at least pretend"
20030310, Panel 2, Meji's second bubble: "held too" -> "held to"
20030319, Panel 6, Jon's third bubble: "what ever happen" -> "whatever happened"
20030319, Panel 6, Jon's third bubble: "old fashion" -> "old fashioned"
20030328, Panel 3, Jon's second bubble: "wouldn't of had" -> "wouldn't have had"
20030331, Panel 1, Jon's first bubble: "police man" -> "policeman"
20030404, Panel 1, Meji's second bubble: "what ever" -> "whatever"
20030404, Panel 3, Meji's second bubble: "dam" -> "damn"
20030404, Panel 3, Meji's third bubble: "to thrown" -> "to throw"

Chapter 3: The Best Of Intentions

20030428, Panel 5, Meji's first bubble: "must have not have" -> "must not have"
20030430, Panel 1, Meji's second bubble: "what happen" -> "what happened"
20030430, Panel 3, Jon's second bubble: "screw up" -> "screwup"
20030430, Panel 4, Ellis' first bubble: "suppose to" -> "supposed to"
20030502, Panel 2, that guy's first bubble: "suppose to" -> "supposed to"
20030502, Panel 4, Ian's first bubble: "surly" -> "surely"
20030507, Panel 2, Meji's first bubble: "a unnecessary" -> "an unnecessary"
20030507, Panel 3, Ellis' first bubble: "a introduction" -> "an introduction"
20030514, Panel 2, Gabriel's second bubble: "for quite awhile" -> "for quite a while"

Chapter 4: Attachments

20030709, Panel 2, the other person's third bubble: "just wave" -> "just a wave"
20030716, Panel 4, the guard's first bubble: "I sorry" -> "I'm sorry"
20030723, Panel 1, Ian's first bubble: "had priest" -> "had a priest"
20030808, Panel 5, Jon's third bubble: "where you kids" -> "where are you kids"
20030812, Panel 5, Meji's first bubble: "affect Ian and I" -> "affect Ian and me"
20030822, Panel 3, Jon's second bubble: "your right" -> "you're right"
20030827, Panel 2, Meji's third bubble: "shock wave" -> "a shock wave"
20030827, Panel 4, Meji's second bubble: "monkey like" -> "monkey-like"
20030829, Panel 1, Jon's second bubble: "where ever" -> "wherever"
20030829, Panel 2, Ian's first bubble: "eleven" -> "elven"
20030829, Panel 3, Meji's second bubble: "read it" -> "read in"
20030829, Panel 4, Ian's fifth bubble: "something happen" -> "something happened"

Chapter 5: Where Do We Go When We Just Don't Know...

20030917, Panel 3, Ian's third bubble: "it's nothing's wrong" -> "nothing's wrong"
20030922, Panel 2, Ian's fourth bubble: "had happen" -> "had happened"
20031013, Panel 2, Ian's fourth bubble: "who ever" -> "whoever"
20031013, Panel 2, Ian's fourth bubble: "actually warning" -> "actually a warning"
20031015, Panel 1, Meji's sixth bubble: "some where" -> "somewhere"
20031015, Panel 2, Meji's second bubble: "then they are" -> "than they are"
20031015, Panel 4, Meji's second bubble: "any these" -> "any of these"
20031015, Panel 4, Meji's third bubble: "where the all" -> "where all the"
20031015, Panel 5, Meji's first bubble: "be might" -> "might be"
20031017, Panel 3, Ian's second bubble: "been awhile" -> "been a while"
20031031, Panel 3, Meji's third bubble: "nothing happen" -> "nothing happened"
20031103, Panel 3, Meji's third bubble: "impoverish" -> "impoverished"
20031117, Panel 5, the seamstress' fourth bubble: "under funded" -> "underfunded"
20031126, Panel 3, Toren's first bubble: "Veracia church" -> "Veracian church"
20031201, Panel 1, Toren's second bubble: "an mental" -> "a mental"

Chapter 6: A Fork In The Road

20031222, Panel 3, Korene's third bubble: "to at heal" -> "to heal"
20040126, Panel 1, Sarine's second bubble: "certainty" -> "certainly"
20040202, Panel 4, Jon's second bubble: "some how" -> "somehow"
20040202, Panel 4, Jon's third bubble: "specially" -> "especially"
20040202, Panel 4, Jon's fourth bubble: "now days" -> "nowadays"
20040204, Panel 3, Jon's second bubble: "someplace" -> "some place"
20040220, Panel 3, Sarna's second bubble: "them selves" -> "themselves"
20040220, Panel 4, Sarna's second bubble: "body guard" -> "bodyguard"
20040220, Panel 4, the mother's last bubble: "can not" -> "cannot"

Chapter 7: Travel Sick

20040305, Panel 1, Paul's first bubble: "what happen" -> "what happened"
20040305, Panel 4, Paul's fourth bubble: "certainty" -> "certainly"
20040308, Panel 4, Anita's third bubble: "able annex" -> "able to annex"
20040308, Panel 4, Anita's third bubble: "without hardly any" -> "with hardly any"
20040310, Panel 4, Paul's first bubble: "as of much" -> "of as much"
20040402, Panel 3, Mandi's second bubble: "after awhile" -> "after a while"
20040402, Panel 5, Jon's second bubble: "up stairs" -> "upstairs"
20040405, Panel 4, Jon's fourth bubble: "post-humourously" -> "posthumously"
20040407, Panel 4, Jon's third bubble: "where ever" -> "wherever"
20040407, Panel 4, Jon's third bubble: "what ever" -> "whatever"
20040412, Panel 2, Jon's second bubble: "being having" -> "be having"
20040505, Panel 4, Jon's first bubble: "anymore than" -> "any more than"
20040507, Panel 3, Mandi's second bubble: "who'd I'd" -> "who I'd"
20040507, Panel 6, Sarine's second bubble: "a few way" -> "a few ways"
20040516, Panel 5, Jon's fourth bubble: "find at" -> "find out"
20040519, Panel 4, Jon's first bubble: "what happen" -> "what happened"
20040526, Panel 4, Meji's second bubble: "than you should got" -> "then you should've got"
20040528, Panel 4, Mandi's second bubble: "what ever" -> "whatever"

Chapter 8: Lost In The Distant Horizon

20040602, Panel 4, Meji's fourth bubble: "manish" -> "mannish"
20040607, Panel 3, Mandi's fifth bubble: "underst and" -> "understand"
20040609, Panel 1, Sarine's second bubble: "equivalence" -> "equivalent"
20040609, Panel 2, Sarine's first bubble: "most anything" -> "almost anything"
20040623, Panel 6, Jon's third bubble: "would only about" -> "would only be about"
20040630, Panel 4, Jon's third bubble: "acafé" -> "a café"
20040707, Panel 3, Jon's first bubble: "an meow" -> "a meow"
20040707, Panel 3, Ellis' first bubble: "have rathered" -> "rather have had"
20040712, Panel 1, Jon's third bubble: "wondering" -> "wandering"
20040827, Panel 2, Meji's fifth bubble: "think need" -> "think I need"

Chapter 9: Worn Paths

20040901, Panel 3, Jon's second bubble: "when ever" -> "whenever"
20040908, Panel 4, Sarine's first bubble: "suject" -> "subject"
20040922, Panel 1, Jon's second bubble: "them selves" -> "themselves"
20040924, Panel 3, Sarine's second bubble: "off hand" -> "offhand"
20040924, Panel 3, Sarine's fourth bubble: "assigned Tsuiraku" -> "assigned to Tsuiraku"
20041001, Panel 3, Sarine's second bubble: "profession" -> "professional"
20041011, Panel 4, Ellis' first bubble: "s'pose to" -> "s'posed to"
20041013, Panel 1, Sarine's sixth bubble: "southern half continent" -> "the southern half of the continent"
20041013, Panel 1, Sarine's ninth bubble: "tospread" -> "to spread"
20041015, Panel 1, Sarine's third bubble: "capitol" -> "capital"

Chapter 10: Antique Lands

20041020, third box: "where ever" -> "wherever"
20041020, eleventh box: "tailor made" -> "tailormade"
20041027, eighth box: "deign ourselves by doing" -> "deign to do"
20041029, second box: "certainty" -> "certainly"
20041103, fourth box: "anyways" -> "anyway"
20041105, Panel 1, Jon's first bubble: "self worth" -> "self-worth"
20041105, Panel 3, Sarine's third bubble: "suppose to" -> "supposed to"
20041117, Panel 3, Sarine's second bubble: "came the gods" -> "came to the gods"
20041117, Panel 4, Meji's first bubble: "equivalencies" -> "equivalents"
20041122, third box: "renown" -> "renowned"
20041122, eighth box: "for he did" -> "for what he did"
20041129, Panel 4, Ellis' first bubble: "did she said" -> "did she say"
20041201, Panel 2, Sarine's second bubble: "they have" -> "they had"
20041206, Panel 4, Sarine's first bubble: "relatively still intact" -> "still relatively intact"

Chapter 11: Half Sunk

20041224, Panel 2, Jeramel's first bubble: "most degree of discretion" -> "greatest degree of discretion"
20050101, Panel 4, Anita's bubble: "arraignment" -> "arrangement"
20050105, Panel 4, Anita's second bubble: "might be still" -> "might still be"
20050119, Panel 5, Jeramel's second bubble: "mine own" -> "my own"
20050124, Panel 4, Sarine's second bubble: "able understand" -> "able to understand"
20050126, Panel 2, Meji's first bubble: "suppose to" -> "supposed to"
20050126, Panel 2, Meji's second bubble: "then anything else" -> "than anything else"
20050126, Panel 2, Ellis' bubble: "then anyone else" -> "than anyone else"
20050126, Panel 3, Sarine's third bubble: "wondering" -> "wandering"

Chapter 12: Shattered Visage

20050223, Panel 3, Meji's bubble: "s'pose" -> "s'posed"
20050307, Panel 2, Sarine's second bubble: "what ever" -> "whatever"
20050309, Panel 1, Connel's bubble: "every where" -> "everywhere"
20050309, Panel 4, the guard's second bubble: "any thing" -> "anything"
20050311, Panel 6, the guard's bubble: "suppose to" -> "supposed to"
20050413, Panel 1, Anita's second bubble: "helped turned" -> "helped turn"
20050413, Panel 1, Anita's fourth bubble: "weaker then" -> "weaker than"
20050413, Panel 4, Paul's second bubble: "anymore then" -> "any more than"

Chapter 13: Don't Want This

20050425, Panel 3, Sarine's second-to-last bubble: "for awhile" -> "for a while"
20050429, Panel 2, Sarine's second bubble: "road side" -> "roadside"
20050504, Panel 3, Jon's first bubble: "some idea how" -> "some idea of how"
20050511, Panel 3, Melrin's third bubble: "horde" -> "hoard"
20050511, Panel 3, Melrin's fifth bubble: "surly" -> "surely"
20050513, Panel 1, Melrin's fourth bubble: "what so ever" -> "whatsoever"
20050516, Panel 5, Meji's third bubble: "all fairness" -> "in all fairness"
20050516, Panel 5, Meji's last bubble: "over privileged" -> "overprivileged"
20050518, Panel 1, Meji's second bubble: "who ever" -> "whoever"

Chapter 14: Which Yet Survive

20050610, Panel 4, Meji's second bubble: "how much you" -> " how much do you"
20050617, Panel 1, Sarine's bubble: "suppose to" -> "supposed to"
20050620, Panel 5, Jon's second bubble: "sooner then" -> "sooner than"

Chapter 15: That Dream Where You...

20050706, Panel 8, Meji's bubble: "forrest" -> "forest"
20050708, Panel 1, Meji's bubble: "what ever" -> "whatever"
20050715, Panel 6, Jon's second bubble: "integration" -> "interrogation"
20050720, Panel 6, Sarine's second bubble: "where ever" -> "wherever"
20050727, Panel 8, Jon's first bubble: "they're be" -> "they'll"
20050803, Panel 2, Sarine's first bubble: "pointles s" -> "pointless"
20050803, Panel 5, Jon's second bubble: "what ever" -> "whatever"
20050808, Panel 5, Jon's second bubble: "out lived" -> "outlived"

Chapter 16: Stamped On These Lifeless Things

20050822, Panel 3, Sarine's bubble: "in a very long time" -> "for a very long time"
20050831, Panel 4, Sarine's first bubble: "no where near" -> "nowhere near"
20050831, Panel 4, Sarine's second bubble: "any thing near by" -> "anything nearby"
20050831, Panel 6, Meji's second bubble: "going walk off" -> "going to walk off"
20050902, Panel 6, Jon's first bubble: "what ever" -> "whatever"
20050905, Panel 6, Sarine's first bubble: "cable" -> "capable"
20050909, Panel 1, Meji's third bubble: "what ever" -> "whatever"
20050909, Panel 5, Sarine's second bubble: "any thing" -> "anything"

Chapter 17: Expectations

20050926, Panel 2, Kawaii's second bubble: "in awhile" -> "in a while"
20050928, Panel 5, Meji's second bubble: "all powerful" -> "all-powerful"
20051005, Panel 4, Nookie's fourth bubble: "none the less" -> "nonetheless"
20051010, Panel 4, Nookie's second bubble: "which ever" -> "whichever"
20051012, Panel 4, Sarine's second bubble: "suppose to" -> "supposed to"
20051017, Panel 3, Ellis' second bubble: "one her holy deities" -> "one of her holy deities"
20051019, Panel 2, Jon's first bubble: "your self" -> "yourself"
20051019, Panel 4, Jon's bubble: "mind wipe" -> "mindwipe"
20051021, Panel 5, Ellis' first bubble: "mind wiped" -> "mindwiped"
20051021, Panel 5, Ellis' third bubble: "and not quite so" -> "and a not quite so"
20051024, Panel 1, Jon's first bubble: "less pissed off then" -> "less pissed off than"
20051024, Panel 2, Jon's fourth bubble: "lay here" -> "lie here"
20051024, Panel 4, Ellis' second bubble: "for awhile" -> "for a while"
20051109, Panel 4, Ellis' bubble: "asks you blow" -> "asks you to blow"
20051114, Panel 1, Sarine's third bubble: "they did try to" -> "they do try to"
20051116, Panel 1, Ellis' bubble: "to giver" -> "to give"
20051116, Panel 4, Ellis' third bubble: "well known" -> "well-known"
20051116, Panel 5, Sarine's second bubble: "what ever" -> "whatever"

Chapter 18: An Interlude...

20060106, Panel 1, Evelyn's second bubble: "s'pose to" -> "s'posed to"
20060106, Panel 4, Evelyn's first bubble: "for awhile" -> "for a while"
20060111, Panel 2 of Ian's letter: "absolutly" -> "absolutely"
20060113, Panel 1 of Ian's letter: "maxwel" -> "Maxwel"
20060113, Panel 4 of Ian's letter: "no where" -> "nowhere"
20060113, Panel 4 of Ian's letter: "theres" -> "there's"
20060113, Panel 5 of Ian's letter: "desperly" -> "desperately"
20060116, Panel 2, Ian's first bubble: "in awhile" -> "in a while"
20060123, Panel 3, Toren's second bubble: "sending my team and I" -> "sending my team and me"
20060123, Panel 3, Toren's third bubble: "suppose to be" -> "supposed to be"
20060123, Panel 5, Toren's first bubble: "that's happen" -> "that's happened"
20060123, Panel 5, Toren's second bubble: "nearlytwo" -> "nearly two"
20060201, Panel 2, the clerk's last bubble: "blood stream" -> "bloodstream"
20060206, Panel 4, Ian's second thought bubble: "begining" -> "beginning"
20060206, Panel 4, Ian's second thought bubble: "be pain" -> "be a pain"
20060215, Panel 2, Ian's bubble: "mind fuck" -> "mindfuck"
20060220, Panel 5, Kawaii's second bubble: "s'pose" -> "s'posed"
20060224, Panel 3, Kawaii's second bubble: "awhile back" -> "a while back"
20060224, Panel 3, Kawaii's third bubble: "though" -> "thought"
20060227, Panel 4, Ian's second bubble: "humming bird" -> "hummingbird"
20060227, Panel 5, Ian's third bubble: "what ever" -> "whatever"

Chapter 19: Burden In My Hand

20060310, Panel 4, Gabriel's third bubble: "parden" -> "pardon"
20060313, Panel 7, the priest's bubble: "you time" -> "your time"
20060313, Panel 7, the monk's second bubble: "you mention" -> "to mention"
20060315, Panel 1, the priest's first bubble: "for awhile" -> "for a while"
20060317, Panel 2, Sarine's fourth bubble: "serous" -> "serious"
20060317, Panel 2, Sarine's fifth bubble: "thatas" -> "that as"
20060317, Panel 4, Sarine's first bubble: "I could I even" -> "I could even"
20060320, Panel 1, Jon's first bubble: "well being" -> "wellbeing"
20060320, Panel 1, Sarine's first bubble: "has go" -> "has to go"
20060322, Panel 1, Jon's third bubble: "lots anonymous" -> "lots of anonymous"
20060329, Panel 2, Jon's third bubble: "it's ass" -> "its ass"
20060329, Panel 2, Ellis' third bubble: "with out" -> "without"
20060329, Panel 2, Ellis' third bubble: "suppose" -> "supposed"

Chapter 20: Home Again, Home Again...

20060503, Panel 4, Sarine's first bubble: "who ever" -> "whoever"
20060503, Panel 5, Sarine's first bubble: "disgruntaled" -> "disgruntled"
20060512, Panel 2, the council member's second bubble: "revel" -> "reveal"
20060512, Panel 3, the council member's second bubble: "ether" -> "either"
20060512, Panel 3, the council member's fourth bubble: "thier" -> "their"
20060515, Panel 2, the council member's first bubble: "ravel platform" -> "travel platform"
20060515, Panel 2, the council member's fifth bubble: "creatures" -> "creature"
20060517, Panel 3, Sarine's second bubble: "cover up" -> "coverup"
20060517, Panel 4, the council member's fifth bubble: "on own" -> "on his own"
20060517, Panel 5, the council member's last bubble: "remand" -> "remain"
20060522, Panel 3, Sarine's second bubble: "root like" -> "rootlike"
20060522, Panel 3, Sarine's third bubble: "happen" -> "happened"

Chapter 21: Flying Away

20060605, Panel 2, the nurse's fourth bubble: "al right" -> "alright"
20060616, Panel 1, Sarine's first bubble: "day light" -> "daylight"
20060616, Panel 2, Sarine's second-to-last bubble: "other then" -> "other than"
20060619, Panel 1, Misa's second bubble: "hand hold" -> "handhold"
20060628, Panel 2, Meji's third bubble: "you've just" -> "you've just been"
20060628, Panel 2, Meji's third bubble: "what ever" -> "whatever"
20060630, Panel 1, Ian's sixth bubble: "what happen" -> "what happened"
20060630, Panel 1, Ian's sixth bubble: "ether" -> "either"
20060630, Panel 2, Meji's first bubble: "what do think happen" -> "what do you think happened"
20060703, Panel 1, Meji's first bubble: "where ever town" -> "wherever this town"

Chapter 22: Cold Commands

20060712, Panel 4, Warrel's bubble: "anymore" -> "any more"
20060717, Panel 4, Paul's second bubble: "a fairly large troll settlements" -> "a fairly large troll settlement"
20060717, Panel 4, Paul's last bubble: "trolls refugees" -> "troll refugees"
20060719, Panel 1, Anita's fourth bubble: "a bit a fear" -> "a bit of fear"
20060719, Panel 1, Paul's fifth bubble: "also the why cannibalism" -> "also why cannibalism"
20060719, Panel 3, Anita's bubble: "how do know" -> "how do you know"
20060719, Panel 3, Paul's second bubble: "Emery \n lon" -> "Emery- \n lon" (\n = line break)
20060719, Panel 3, Paul's second bubble: "churches libraries" -> "church's libraries" or "church libraries"
20060719, Panel 4, Paul's second bubble: "Warrel's novice, Sara is" -> "Warrel's novice, Sara, is"
20060721, Panel 1, Paul's first bubble: "by way of Veracia run orphanage" -> "by way of a Veracia run orphanage"
20060721, Panel 1, Paul's second bubble: "father was" -> "her father was" or "the father was"
20060724, Panel 2, Ellis' second bubble: "...in anyway, shape..." -> "...in any way, shape..."
20060724, Panel 3, Jon's first bubble: "never ending" -> "never-ending"
20060726, Panel 3, Anne's first bubble: "breath" -> "breathe"
20060728, Panel 1, Anne's bubble: "A piece of advice though first, Jon?" -> "A piece of advice first, though, Jon?" as it's being used as an intensive
20060728, Panel 4, Ellis' second bubble: "Knit a nice warm fuzzy scarf then choke them..." -> "Knit a nice, warm, fuzzy scarf and then choke them..."
20060731, Panel 4, Gabriel's first bubble: "Veracia church" -> "Veracian church"
20060809, Panel 4, Gabriel's third bubble: "too vital for us to pass us" -> "too vital for us to pass up"
20060814, Panel 1, Ellis' first bubble: "Oh shut the fuck up" -> "Oh, shut the fuck up"
20060814, Panel 1, Jon's fourth bubble: "pedophilia isn't it?" -> "pedophilia, isn't it?"

Chapter 23: Killers

20060818, first massive text block: "happen around her" -> "happened around her"
20060818, first massive text block: "had began" -> "had begun"
20060818, second massive text block: "that jump.\n ' Said the old" -> "that jump.'\n said the old" (\n = line break)
20060818, third massive text block: "It happened quick." -> "It happened quickly."
20060818, third massive text block: "that s it" -> "that's it"
20060819, first massive text block: "out race" -> "outrace"
20060819, first massive text block: "Taking advantage of the novice's slowness. She charged towards him..." -> "Taking advantage of the novice's slowness, she charged towards him..."
20060819, second massive text block: "looked the meeting was breaking up" -> "looked like the meeting was breaking up".
20060821, Panel 3, Warrel's first bubble: "check and make sure" -> "check to make sure"
20060823, Panel 2, Warrel's bubble: "your job execute him" should be "your job to execute him"
20060825, Panel 1, Jon's second bubble: "suppose to be" -> "supposed to be"
20060825, Panel 1, Jon's third bubble: "suppose to be" -> "supposed to be"
20060825, Panel 3, Jon's bubble: "cramp little dark corner" -> "cramped little dark corner"
20060828, Panel 4, Jon's first bubble: "look where the shot" -> "look for where the shot"
20060828, Panel 4, Jon's last bubble: "out the building" -> "out of the building"
20060828, Panel 4, Jon's last bubble: "by they get anyone up here" -> "by the time they get anyone up here" or "before they get anyone up here"
20060901, Panel 3, Sarine's first bubble: "enough to self control" -> "enough self control"
20060901, Panel 3, Sarine's first bubble: "not makeing too much noise" -> "not making too much noise"
20060901, Panel 3, Sarine's third bubble: "oh and best use of a ball gag I've ever seen by the way" -> "oh, and best use of a ball gag I've ever seen, by the way"
20060901, Panel 4, Sarine's second bubble: "you're a profession, after all" -> "you're a professional, after all."
20060904, Panel 1 Sarine's first bubble: "brighter outlook for an awhile." -> "brighter outlook for a while."
20060904, Panel 1, Sarine's second bubble: "for an awhile" -> "for a while"
20060904, Panel 3, Sarine's third bubble: "and what about what the first" -> "and what about the first"
20060906, Panel 1, Sarine's fourth bubble: "discourage you, from" -> "discourage you from"
20060918: Panel 3, Paul's second bubble: "preformed" -> "performed"

Chapter 24: If I Ever Leave This World Alive

20061020, Panel 2, Warrel's bubble: "confidant" -> "confident"
20061108, Panel 3, Jon's second bubble. "surly" -> "surely"
20061108, Panel 3, Jon's second bubble. "wasn't actually wasn't" -> "wasn't actually"
20061108, Panel 3, Jon's sixth bubble. "yean" -> "yeah"
20061108, Panel 3, Jon's seventh bubble. "get away" -> "getaway"

Chapter 25: Meanwhile...

20061120, Panel 3, Riley's fourth bubble: "make due" -> "make do"
20061127, Panel 2, Meji's third bubble: "why did hell I" -> "why the hell did I"
20061127, Panel 5, Meji's fourth bubble: "no where" -> "nowhere"
20061129, Panel 5, Meji's third bubble: "could please we go" -> "could we please go"
20061129, Panel 5, Meji's fourth bubble: "your self" -> "yourself"
20061208, Panel 2, Meji's last bubble: "others mages" -> "other mages"
20061211, Panel 3, Riley's bubble: "just teeny tiny bit" -> "just a teeny tiny bit"
20061211, Panel 4, Ian's second bubble: "won't hurt any thing" -> "won't hurt a thing"
20061213, Panel 2, Ian's second bubble: "it is" -> "is it"
20061220, Panel 1, Ian's second bubble: "happen" -> "happened"
20061220, Panel 2, Leah's third bubble: "fire" -> "a fire"
20061220, Panel 6, Leah's fourth bubble: "it was accident" -> "it was an accident"

Chapter 26: Nothing Beside Remains

20070117, Panel 6, Leah's first bubble: "I willing" -> "I'm willing"
20070117, Panel 7, Ian's bubble: "your not wearing" -> "you're not wearing"
20070117, Panel 9, Leah's last bubble: "some what see" -> "somewhat see"
20070117, Panel 9, Leah's last bubble: "with out" -> "without"
20070124, Panel 2, Riley's bubble: "then healing" -> "than healing"
20070126, Panel 5, Riley's second bubble: "boarder" -> "border"
20070126, Panel 5, Leah's fourth bubble: "suppose to" -> "supposed to"
20070205, Panel 2, Meji's third bubble: "falling over you're" -> "falling over because you're"
20070205, Panel 4, Meji's first bubble: "shows over" -> "show's over"
20070205, Panel 4, Meji's third bubble: "have go home" -> "have to go home"
20070207, Panel 4, Meji's third bubble: "retarded before it" -> "retarded so many times before it"
20070209, Panel 4, last bubble: "certainty" -> "certainly"
20070209, Panel 5, Meji's first bubble: "hole in a ground" -> "hole in the ground"
20070219, Panel 2, Riley's third bubble: "suppose to" -> "supposed to"

Chapter 27: Out Of Reach

20070321, Panel 1, Anita's second bubble: "Gewehr\n 's" -> "Gewehr's" (\n = line break)
20070321, Panel 3, Anita's second bubble: "step foot in Veracia" -> "set foot in Veracia"
20070323, Panel 1, Paul's first bubble: "was overconfident fool" -> "was an overconfident fool"
20070323, Panel 1, Paul's second bubble: "fight fair" -> "fair fight"
20070323, Panel 2, Anita's first bubble: "suppose to" -> "supposed to"
20070323, Panel 2, Anita's second bubble: "ether" -> "either"
20070323, Panel 3, Anita's first bubble: "in light of events" -> "in light of recent events"
20070323, Panel 3, Paul's first bubble: "try to not sound" -> "try not to sound"
20070326, Panel 3, Sarine's third bubble: "put the substance" -> "use the substance"
20070326, Panel 3, Sarine's third bubble: "it's full potential" -> "its full potential"
20070328, Panel 3, Sarine's second bubble: "lock enchant" -> "lock enchantment"
20070404, Panel 1, Jon's first bubble: "what happen to you" -> "what happened to you"
20070404, Panel 1, Jon's second bubble: "how you end up" -> "how'd you end up"
20070418, Panel 3, Sarine's second bubble: "if you not going to" -> "if you're not going to"
20070420, Panel 3, Sarine's fourth bubble: "concern" -> "concerned"
20070423, Panel 2, Sarine's third bubble: "there's clearing near by" -> "there's a clearing nearby"
20070502, Panel 3, Sarine's second bubble: "suppose to" -> "supposed to"
20070504, Panel 1, Sarine's second bubble: "use to" -> "used to"
20070504, Panel 2, Sarine's second bubble: "conversion" -> "conversation"
20070504, Panel 3, Sarine's second bubble: "in to" -> "into" (or in- (line break)to)
20070514, Panel 2, Sarine's first bubble: "you're teachers" -> "your teachers"
20070518, Panel 4, Ellis' fourth bubble: "id" -> "I'd"


Chapter 28: Come Round

20070523, Panel 1, Etsuko's first bubble: "then what happen" -> "then what happened"
20070523, Panel 3, Meji's second bubble: "they showed how" -> "they showed me how"
20070525, panel 1, Etsuko's first bubble: "to go the hair stylist" -> "to go to the hair stylist"
20070525, panel 1, Etsuko's first bubble: "get ice cream" -> "get some ice cream"
20070525, panel 3, Etsuko's second bubble: "I'll just have to harder" -> "I'll just have to try harder"
20070525, panel 5, Meji's second bubble: "stank" -> "stink" (or maybe "stench")
20070525, panel 5, Meji's second bubble: "going attain" -> "going to attain"
20070528, Panel 2, Meji's second bubble: "suppose to" -> "supposed to"
20070528, Panel 3, Etsuko's second bubble: "out my way" -> "out of my way"
20070528, Panel 3, Etsuko's second bubble: "whining" -> "whine"
20070528, Panel 3, Etsuko's third bubble: "you've" -> "you"
20070604, Panel 1, Sarine's first bubble: "nether" -> "neither"
20070604, Panel 2, Jon's third bubble: "ten fold" -> "tenfold"
20070606, Panel 3, the guard's second bubble: "he would have several other people would be arriving" -> "he would have several other people arriving"
20070608, panel 5, Jon's second bubble, "somewhere where between" -> "somewhere between"
20070615, panel 3, Meji's first bubble, "how you'd" -> "how'd you" (as in 'how did you')
20070625, panel 3, Miyo's second bubble, "giving" -> "given"

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