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August 26th, 2013
[CT] Pick Up Artist
[CT] Pick Up Artist

This exchange felt a little unnatural.  Like they’re still too uneasy and unfamiliar with each other to be this casually flippant or something.  It kind of feels like it’s trying to hard to be movie dialog, rather than something that might be said in this situation.

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