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August 29th, 2013
[CT] Downright Civil
[CT] Downright Civil

I really liked this page.  The only iffy bit was that it seems like Sarine should have been exposing a bit more of her arm in the second panel, to make it more clear she’s holding Jon’s arm down.  Also the proportions of her face are a bit wonky in the last panel, but I did like how the slight tilt of her head came out.

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